Last in revisions for Challenge #13. This is Challenge #13c, which asked for:

If you participated in Part 1 and Part 2, you now have a story less than 250 words. Your goal now is to pare it down so that your story is between 100-125 words

If you've read the original ( here), then feel free to skim over this one.

Drag me through this ( Read more... )

You can all skim over this if you've read the original ( here). Fulfillment for Challenge #13b: Back to Basics at writerverse, which asked for:

For this part you will take the story you wrote in Part 1 and revise it down to be within 200-250 words. This means you may rework the story however necessary so long as you don't change the heart and soul of your ( Read more... )

WHAT THE HELL DID I JUST DO?!? *headdesk* Okay, so this very obviously takes place after the Boston vs. Canucks game on Saturday. So, there's this gif of Edler being upset after Salo got hurt, and I kind of ran with the idea. Yes, that's Seidenberg (I even googled which Bruin wears #44). This is the end result. You can all ignore this. Unless, y' ( Read more... )